ext_3422 ([identity profile] asugar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gelbes_gilatier 2008-12-27 09:43 pm (UTC)

I've left you the same pretty much on FF. This is just too fantastic. Great little bit of Mitchell at the beginning. You've captured so well the dilemma of work and home and its impact on Laura. This is perfect and heartbreaking angst until that last little bit at the end when they finally really hear each other. I love all of this especially their precious little girl and what a fabulous father Lorne is and how he loves and supports Laura no matter what the cost to himself. The way she listens because she can't bear to disclose herself just yet. There is such gorgeous tension and chemistry between them. I just can't get enough of your stories of them.

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